This essay was photocopied and distributed to everyone in Anderson Junior College by the HOD of GP as a piece of model essay for everyone to learn from. It was given the highest grade for that question.
Some quotes:
Since the intention of computers and ingenious soft wares like Microsoft, the number of games for the computer is also inumerable.
…Playstations and XBOX…can be plugged into the computer
Games such as Warcraft allows the games to build an army to plot them against evil aliens that are out to destory earth.
Counterstrike, the gamer get to plan his army to save the earth too.
And the conclusion of the essay?
But the point here is that the intention is good, which is to sve people and eliminate the evil enemies.
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Wow. AJC’s tutors’ standards have dropped since the last I was there.
I believe its standard is quite consistent:)
Hahahaha. Had a good laugh.
HELLO WK. HERES JUMPINJELLY =D
*bounces off
@WK: I had a pretty good tutor when I was in JC1… 8 long years ago.. He promptly left when I moved to JC2, and I had a horrible one.. All she cared about was going to meet her boyfriend after school.
I agree with Wei Kiat. The standard is quite consistent, if not worse. A decade ago, the entire English department was a total disgrace. There are students who could actually write, speak and teach better than the tutors. And there were students so weak in GP, they literally write essays in completely broken English but receive a ‘pass’ grade from the tutors on account of ‘content’ being there.
To quote some something recalled from memory when I read some of the horrible essays:
“The computer industry booming, so websites number increase. Therefore companies make money a lot.”
Basic idea: Write a proper sentence, take out all possible connectors and jumble up some words in a Singlish manner. That’s the quality you get. I think a secondary school student could write better than those JC students and tutors there.
A decade later, I still think they’re a piece of crap. And I have no qualms criticizing my alma mater to the core. A school with no innovative learning and direct memorization of 10 year series to keep up with its (then) 6th ranking among the (then) 14 JCs in Singapore. It was a total mistake even putting the JC as one of my choices, and it’s the only thing more shameful than criticizing it, should some people point out that fact.